For the first post I chose to critique, the author decided to do a musician's bio on Atlanta rapper Lil Baby. Their post was a short written summary of the artist's life and work, including their musical career. The author started the post with a quote from reporter Brittani Holmes. Which emphasizes how many people, especially those in the metropolitan Atlanta area, considers Lil baby to be the greatest of all time rapper. In the section “A minor setback for a major comeback” it is stated that “as an adolescent, lil baby leaned more toward a life of petty crime and street hustling.” I appreciate how the author included this detail, as it highlights the tough surroundings he faced during his rise to fame. More over, the author mentions that “he always had a passion for music”. I believe this segment could have been a bit more clarifying because in recent interviews Lil baby has exclaimed that he did not know he was always going to be a rapper. My favorite part of the post is when the author highlights what is “beyond the music”, this portion goes on to include that during the Black Lives Matter protests, lil baby demonstrated his unity by creating a song “the bigger picture”. This speaks to his civic engagement. Overall, this post was near accurate and created the perfect visual for someone who is unfamiliar with Lil Baby.